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07/14/2005 11:22:33 PM |
*Critique Club*
I think that this is great!! I wish that there was more focus on the texture of the match though. The wooden match is overexposed. I would have cropped the bottom off under the match. I think that with different cropping and lighting, this entry would have done much better. I hope this was helpful. I am really tired. Good luck in future challenges and God Bless.
Mandy |
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07/10/2005 11:38:06 PM |
| nice composition, good background for subject, good focus |
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07/09/2005 11:23:42 PM |
| maybe a tighter crop so the image is not so square? A narrower format would imply smoke going up. and the really interesting smoke is in middle vertically. |
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07/08/2005 09:00:23 PM |
| Good image. Photographing smoke is not easy. |
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07/06/2005 04:59:17 PM |
| seems out of focus somewhat |
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07/06/2005 03:11:12 AM |
| The straight angle of the match does´nt go well in portrait format. You should have used landscape. (But that´s only my opinion ofcourse :) Like it though...I´ll just turn my screen 90 degrees. |
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07/05/2005 06:46:45 PM |
| Good attempt, a little flame would have put it over the top. |
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07/05/2005 03:53:50 PM |
| Interesting image, I like the composition. |
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07/04/2005 11:50:49 AM |
Base: 5
Tech: +2
Subj:+1
Chln:
Total: 8
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07/04/2005 10:05:00 AM |
| Been done a lot but I still like it, well done. |
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07/04/2005 01:06:11 AM |
| I like this. I am glad you kept it in color - I've seen others that went to grayscale and this touch of warm in the wooden match stick is interesting. Very crisp detail. |
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