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05/12/2003 07:10:32 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Photochix....
The challenge is met nicely with this photo... I particularly liked some of the images in this challenge that took alternative paths from the 'normal' modes of transportation that everyone would normally think about.
I think you did a good job of composing the legs/feet on the right hand side of the frame... that definitely works better than centering in a horizontal frame. I think this photo could also potentially be strong with centered legs/feet in a vertical frame, allowing the feet to fall on the bottom horizontal third line...
I think this composition could use a little color also... The skin tone of the legs stand out nicely, but if there was some other element of color here, i think it would benefit the image. Maybe some colored socks or something would create that little surprise element that makes the photo really jump.
I also think the shoe may be a little close to the bottom of the frame for comfort... A little extra breathing room there could strengthen the composition as well...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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05/06/2003 01:51:14 PM |
| Very creative idea. Nice use of texture. |
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05/04/2003 04:00:07 PM |
| Good thinking. I didn't think of this. Good for you |
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05/04/2003 07:49:57 AM |
| Interesting idea. I would have liked to see more toe here. The location could probably have been more interesting. |
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05/02/2003 07:19:48 PM |
| This would have been better in black and white.... I give it a 6. |
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05/01/2003 02:17:08 AM |
| I like this photo but i don't think it works in color.. perhaps bw will help? |
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04/30/2003 03:38:49 PM |
| nice composition and lighting. |
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04/30/2003 03:18:14 PM |
| Nice composition - 3 levels of gray, with a tiny corner of green! And walking right down the line are a very interesting pair of shoes. Wish the shoes were completely sharp. |
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04/30/2003 10:38:52 AM |
Good composition, idea. Good shot over all.
I think the focus is a little soft of the legs and the bottom is a tight crop. |
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04/30/2003 02:08:59 AM |
| Him? Looks like feet of the feminine variety to me. Nice light and texture in the rocks. Boring subject, (sorry) |
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04/30/2003 12:38:12 AM |
| the shoes dont really transport him.. his legs do. i'm sure he could still walk without shoes. |
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04/30/2003 12:26:23 AM |
| Cute, I like your title, only thing that could work for a kid on the go, |
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