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Out In the Rain
Out In the Rain
kaysriv


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Transportation (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F505V
Location: St. Louis County, Missouri
Date: Apr 25, 2003
Galleries: Abstract, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Apr 25, 2003

 Taken in the parking lot of a shopping center on this rainy day.

Statistics
Place: 179 out of 246
Avg (all users): 4.7277
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.5794
Avg (non-participants): 4.8774
Views since voting: 720
Votes: 213
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0

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 05/13/2003 03:09:12 PM
From the Critique Club

Hello,

Good closeup, focus is good, good potential. The colours are too muted, you could have brightened them and made them more intense (increased brightness and saturation). There is a dustspeck towards the bottom left. Something to consider: after increasing brighness and saturation, crop the picture all around a bit (mostly on top and right hand side, a bit at the bottom and the left hand side), add a 30 pixel white border (or something like that), and see if you like it.

Take care,

Ursula I Abresch

 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/05/2003 03:44:57 PM
A 7, if only because it's a Porsche.
 05/04/2003 06:24:04 PM
Great photograph lies right inside this one!... First use levels and you'll see the shot's underexposed...move rightmost slider towards the middle until touching the histogram data and you're done there... Boost saturation slightly, and crop photo for a little more abstraction... (I cropper in the uppe-right area, hard to describe how)...Idea's there, just needs some processing...
 05/01/2003 11:51:25 PM
Interesting shot... Lighting seems a bit flat to me, in my opinion. Focus is excellent.
 04/30/2003 02:18:31 PM
More machinery, dull shot. - 3
 04/30/2003 12:35:08 PM
Not crazy about the coloring or darkness but I love the composition. Is this a Porsche?
 04/30/2003 09:03:14 AM
Could have been good but looks a bit dull, i guess thats real rain. Maybe should have used a sunny day and sprayed on some water.


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