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05/13/2003 10:21:19 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Brenquig...
This is an excellent photo... I love the warm feeling of the sunset... excellent job on exposing this to highlight the moment.
The boat is a really nice element in the way you have integrated it with the sunset. I'm a little disappointed that this photo didn't score better than it did.
Compositionally, I think there possibly were some alternative opportunities to make it stronger... Obviously, I dunno what exists outside this frame, but first of all, I think there is a little too much empty space at the bottom of the frame... I think the boat is running a line too close to the center of the frame for my own personal taste. A simple crop seems to make that disappear and create a slightly stronger image for me.
Excellent work and I look forward to seeing more :)
John Setzler
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05/04/2003 08:00:16 AM |
| This is a really nice pic even with the choppy water. Very nice sunset over the boat. |
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05/04/2003 12:00:30 AM |
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05/02/2003 10:11:21 AM |
| Nice sunset, horizon looks a bit up on left hand side. |
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05/01/2003 02:50:24 PM |
| Nice color and I like the texture in the water. I love how the sun is off-centered. The picture does seem a bit dark (try bumping up the gamma) Nicely done. |
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05/01/2003 02:09:31 PM |
| this feels to me more a picture about sunsets, rather than a picture about transport. A viewers attention should be drawn to the boat more than the sunset, prehaps by getting closer to the boat, and shooting from a lower angle so as to try and create a silhouette of the boat against the sun. |
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04/30/2003 09:10:53 PM |
| Very calming shot. You should print and frame it. |
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04/30/2003 04:31:54 PM |
| I think this could be better if it was a bit sharper..... plus it appears that your horizon line is leaning slightly to the left.... |
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04/30/2003 01:30:48 AM |
| Nice sunset..and the incidental boat isn't bad either. ;) |
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