My son, I am going to find new models one day... but I absoulutely adore this...I ran out of time to do another shot...with lights and flowers...So here goes...
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I can remember myself in that world, flying my airplanes. Lighting on the boy is good, but lighting on the toys almost ruins the picture, as it is way too bright in relation to the rest of the photo. I would also just use the one wooden airplane, and maybe have him being flying it, instead of being on the ground. The helicopter in front of his face detracts from the simplicity of the photo you are trying to achieve. One of the keys is to take away anything from the photo that does not specifically add to it. That would be the helicopter. 5
like how the plane on his pajamas reinforces the theme and helps move the eye around. unfortunate you decided to add the helicopter. the shot was a much, much, much stronger composition without it
he has military bombers and tanks and smoke on his pjs, hes playing with airplanes, bet he's playing war rather than package devilery. Is there a world without worries here?