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09/06/2003 07:25:08 PM |
Thanks for your critique, Gekker.
All useful comments.
Cheers
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Message edited by author 2003-09-06 19:25:22. |
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04/30/2003 04:57:09 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Beautiful flowers
COMPOSITION:
Nice simple shot of the flowers. My only suggestion here would be to try cropping a smidge off the bottom, top and a bit off the left side.
TECHINICAL:
Very nice dof. I like how the eye is led from the bottom right up and out to the top left. Dof is underestimated on this site, and you used it very nicely. I like how the focus is on the flowers on the right, and great focus too. Nice use of natural sunlight, I think it worked quite well for you. I would however, try boosting the hue on green, it makes the flowers stand out more, and the background nicer.
OVERALL IMPRESSOIN:
A nice picture but lacking that wow factor that makes for winning photographs. I do however think that this has a lot of potential with just a few minor adjustments.
(btw, my first critique club critique, hope your not too disappointed.)
Good luck in future challenges!
Gekker
Message edited by author 2003-04-30 17:04:15. |
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04/27/2003 10:45:35 AM |
| Great composition and lovely DOF. I really like this photo. It shows a lot of flair and great technique. 10 from me. |
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04/26/2003 08:46:55 PM |
| I don't think I've ever seen these before. They are quite pretty. The DOF and focus works very nicely in my opinion. I like how it goes from bottom right up. the detail you show us in the leaf on the very bottom is quite nice. I like the colors. the yellow/white/green works well. Nice shot. ~Heather~ |
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04/25/2003 10:41:24 PM |
| Good job on composition, but I think the flowers in the foreground should be more in focus. Also perhaps a bit more color or contrast ? |
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04/24/2003 05:23:37 PM |
| I like the off center focal point. Very nice pic. |
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04/23/2003 07:46:30 PM |
| excellent color and good use of shallow depth of field... the composition is great :) - setzler |
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04/22/2003 10:24:17 AM |
| Green, yellow and white complement each other very well and you 've taken full advantage of this. I've always wondered what primroses look like and now I know thank you - Gary. |
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04/21/2003 10:17:56 PM |
| Love the composition and use of dof. Would like to have seen a little more light on bloom in foreground, if I would change anything. |
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04/21/2003 10:58:34 AM |
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04/21/2003 12:20:30 AM |
| beautiful flowers but need more cropping on the left, the 3 in focus are perfect! |
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