Nice shooting. I wonder if you placement of that head within frame is ideal - I'd perhaps have tried to frame the whole head more cemtrally, which would move the eye, the natural point of first focus, to a stronger place in frame, and, I think, have made a more interesting graphic contribution to the entirety of the composition of the dark line of the neck. Obviously, there may beother reasons forcing this crop, but I am talking about an ideal.
None of which is to subtract from the great sense of detail and texture you've captured here, of course. |