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Sin Is In
Sin Is In
Reuben


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Challenge: Games (Classic Editing)
Camera: Kodak DC4800
Location: Renton, WA
Date: May 18, 2002
ISO: 100
Date Uploaded: May 18, 2002

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Statistics
Place: 68 out of 94
Avg (all users): 4.9171
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.8625
Avg (non-participants): 4.9520
Views since voting: 937
Votes: 205
Comments: 28
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/25/2002 08:26:00 AM
Interesting arrangement. Subliminal almost. I'm kind of distracted by the seams in the fabric.
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05/25/2002 03:20:00 AM
Well done except for the shadow on S and I. Does draw attention there, but I'd have found another way.
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05/24/2002 10:21:00 PM
Could have lit this differently to illiminate the shadow ...
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05/23/2002 08:05:00 PM
The shadow cast in the front is a bit distracting. The angle is nice though
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05/23/2002 07:00:00 PM
The lighting is almost too bright on the white part of the cubes, and there is a shadow across the bottom corner. I like the way it fills up the frame and is focused at the bottom and not at the top.
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05/23/2002 12:02:00 PM
Good angle, focus (no pun intended) and DOF. If I had to take the shot, I would probably try a different background (even though it's not that noticeable, the pattern on the cloth is slightly distracting - try cardboard) and I would probably not arrange the letters as symmetrically. In fact, I would either have them fall random or just do one word that I felt was important for the challenge and leave the rest random. Small nitpicks, I know.
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05/23/2002 09:09:00 AM
it looks like there's a shadow (from you or your camera?) on the bottom-right quadrant of the photo. it's especially noticable on the "S" and "I" letters
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05/22/2002 07:22:00 PM
was the yellow tint done on purpose?
05/22/2002 07:09:00 PM
I don't think so. I spend my time trying not to sin.
05/22/2002 02:30:00 PM
Good shot but the yellow shadow on the bottom 2 pieces is a bit distratcing. Looks like you were doing a macro shot and that was the area that was in the shadow from the camera's flash.
05/22/2002 12:11:00 PM
I like the angle of this shot. The shadow kind of takes away from it though.
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05/22/2002 09:41:00 AM
focuses, cosines, cousins.... ;-) -- Nice angle, my only complaint is the shadow in the foreground.
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05/22/2002 08:42:00 AM
I like the dramatic yellow spotlight effect on the s, and just taking in part of the i. Also how the f in focus is out of focus, leading the eye to the s. It took me a minute to realize that there was a stairstep spelling "sin is in", but that's because I don't play boggle. I also liked the repeats on "cosin" Lots of stuff to look at.
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05/22/2002 12:40:00 AM
I can see where that game might end up taking up a lot of time...
05/21/2002 07:33:00 PM
It's a shame there is a shadow on the bottom two letters - good otherwise.
05/21/2002 03:59:00 PM
You have a really cool picture here. Why is the S and I in the foreground yellow? I wish the lighting was a little more even. I like the far away S being out of focus and making it look like its so far away. I also like the horizontal lines on your background it sort of points inward which works well.
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05/21/2002 11:38:00 AM
Interesting shadows on the lower front....
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05/21/2002 06:18:00 AM
the light needs to be more in front of the camera to eliminate it's shadow
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05/20/2002 10:00:00 PM
Nice DOF, though I dislike the shadow over the focus'd S and I.
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05/20/2002 04:34:00 PM
if you got the yellow light on the "n", so that the whole word "sin" was in yellow it would have been a bit better
05/20/2002 03:53:00 PM
Watch your depth of field.
05/20/2002 02:25:00 PM
This is a good photo. I don't like the shadow in the foreground because it is coming from something that is not in the photo... Maybe your camera or someone standing in the light....
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05/20/2002 01:11:00 PM
not sharp< strange color castes
05/20/2002 01:01:00 PM
the shadow really hurts this photo
05/20/2002 11:40:00 AM
Cosine...hehe. Are the front two yellow on purpose? If so, why isn't the N yellow too to fit the title?
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05/20/2002 10:50:00 AM
Creative idea. Shadow lower center is a bit of a bother. Sitll good idea, fun shot.
05/20/2002 10:02:00 AM
Cosine (almost)!
05/20/2002 01:08:00 AM
Odd yellow


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