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05/11/2005 01:05:26 PM |
Hi there from the Critique Club!
I think this was a good entry in the moods challenge. The model's facial expression and general body attitude fits quite well with the title, and I think the lighting could be improved upon, but could have also worked. The skull reflection gives more insight into the mood that's being portrayed as well as the set up process required to achieve it.
There are a few things that I think could be changed to make this a more effective image. First, and I think most importantly, the focus is soft, and the theme of discontent might have been really effective with not only a sharp focus but perhaps even a hypersharp one. Second, the jaw line could have received better definition, and perhaps a lighting shift or a bit of dodge and burn work to emphasize it would have yielded a positive contribution to the image. Third, there are a number of distraction points that could have been shopped out either with cloning or dodge and burn: a) white specks on the hair right above the center part of the sunnies (perhaps they're side effects from the lighting process), b) a shadow that's shaped like a 3 on the forehead, c) a patch of light by the model's right shoulder (to make that area blend better with the rest of the shirt. The same treatment could also be applied to the writing on the shirt), d) another flash of white on the right border near the top, and finally e) a hint of reflective white below the model's left ear. Advanced edit rules allow selective editing, and this image could benefit a lot from such techniques.
I like the crop a lot, showing enough of the body to strengthen the attitude of the model, and this is a large positive contribution to the overall image.
I hope this comment has been constructive, and good luck on the next challenges you enter. See you around. |
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05/08/2005 08:42:05 PM |
| Cool reflection, maybe a little soft but like this one a lot. |
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05/08/2005 12:24:39 AM |
| The skull reflected in the glasses makes this seem needlessly contrived. Given the intended mood, using harsher lighting might have helped make your model look a bit more menacing. |
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05/07/2005 11:57:09 PM |
| Too soft and It has too muc of a "Terminator" ferel to it for my taste. |
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05/06/2005 02:46:22 PM |
"Restlessness and discontent are the necessities of progress". -T.Edison
Artyste, this is great shot that imparts your mood to the viewer. I ove your lighting, almost a gradiant effect across the image. The skull is just too cool. A t first I wished it had been centered in the lens. But the more I look at it the better I like it, almost as if were about to pull off your shades. Good luck on this very fitting and I'm sure ribbon placing submission. -10- |
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05/05/2005 08:09:18 AM |
| nice use of reflection in the sunglasses. Miss some white |
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05/04/2005 08:40:14 PM |
| love the black and white portrait and the image in the glasses ... very creative |
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05/03/2005 07:05:43 PM |
| I can see it. Focus is a bit off, and contrast is a little lacking, but the lighting is dynamic and has a lot of potential. |
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05/03/2005 05:24:56 PM |
| Very cool reflection... (7) |
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05/03/2005 02:04:15 PM |
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05/03/2005 01:04:14 PM |
| Yikes! Great lighting & very creative with that reflection. [10] |
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05/03/2005 12:45:51 PM |
| Is that a reflection of a skull? Great composition |
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05/02/2005 05:32:48 AM |
| the reflection in the glasses is a little "overdoing" it; focus a little too soft too |
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05/02/2005 02:57:41 AM |
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05/02/2005 12:59:11 AM |
| Great reflection in the left lens, a closer crop might help accentuate that little detail. |
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05/02/2005 12:26:48 AM |
| Seems a little soft for the emotion. I'd exect a more "hard" shot. Nice effect with the skull though |
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05/02/2005 12:19:42 AM |
| He looks more mean that discontented. the skull in the glasses is a bit of overkill imo. 5. |
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