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04/19/2003 05:51:44 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Very bright multicolored picture which works great for the color challenge.
COMPOSITION:
The cropping is very different for this type of shot. It allows the blue to show through, but I think a flat crop of just the fabric texture would have been more itneresting.
TECHNICAL:
The focus is right on which allows the texture of the fabric to add to the shot.
OVERALL:
I think the dominant color of blue takes away from the colorful bottom of this shot. Maybe a tighter crop would draw more attention to it. Also the blue seems to have some noise from the camera. A filter like despeckle of remove noise would have fixed this nicely. Slightly changing the subject or how the colors were portrayed could have improved this great shot for the color challenge.
Good luck! |
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04/11/2003 06:32:01 PM |
| This is an interesting idea, but it doesn't quite work as titled. The red hill and roses do fit, but the sky looks like a poorly spray painted wall (I suspect a photo manip here - totally legal one, but didn't quite work). Nice photo of the pillow. 6 Swash |
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04/11/2003 01:28:37 AM |
| too grainy for my taste. sorry. |
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04/10/2003 08:18:03 AM |
| Yep, plenty of color here. Interesting effect with the blue background and the graininess. Good luck. |
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04/09/2003 11:10:03 PM |
| perhaps a little too sharp. |
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04/09/2003 10:27:24 PM |
| A neat idea but the grainy backgroun distracts from the main focal point. If the background were subdued I think it would be real good. 6 |
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04/09/2003 11:03:59 AM |
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04/09/2003 10:27:46 AM |
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04/09/2003 03:21:57 AM |
| Very intriguing. I wonder... |
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04/09/2003 12:23:12 AM |
| I like the composition. The shape created by the furniture and the "sky" are good. More punch in the cloth would be better. |
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04/08/2003 09:55:50 PM |
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04/08/2003 08:45:52 PM |
| Very nice and imaginative Nice textures and colors. 8 |
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04/07/2003 10:48:31 PM |
I am not sure exactly what this is I am looking at but that doesn’t really matter. You have a nice use of color here. It looks like a throw pillow but I can’t figure out what the blue is. I don’t really care for the white spots on the blue. The pillow looks like it might stand to be in a bit sharper focus. There really isn’t a lot here to hold my attention. I gave it a 4.
Greg
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04/07/2003 05:27:32 PM |
| Very cool... How did you get the background? |
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04/07/2003 02:34:13 PM |
| lol what a sense of humor.....lol Good job. |
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04/07/2003 12:58:50 PM |
| Nice texture here and interesting view |
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04/07/2003 10:17:21 AM |
| very nice image i have an image. I think you could have done something more with the backround, but it is a great pic. |
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