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05/09/2005 12:34:45 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club..
Hi Long...
This photo meets the challenge but it seems rather boring to look at. The light is actually drawing my eye away from your subject rather than bringing me to it. You didn't include any of your own thoughts, so I can't offer you much more than that... |
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05/02/2005 10:46:29 PM |
| the face of the jewel should prolly be a bit better lit. i like the light coming through it, though. |
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04/30/2005 04:56:22 PM |
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04/30/2005 10:50:19 AM |
| It's hard to make out what that is without the title. IMO, better lighting was needed for this picture. |
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04/30/2005 06:42:41 AM |
I like the lighting, and the shadow it creates, but i think it would be stronger with a Jewel that was not in a setting.
I was thinking that perhaps the jewel was a bright color, maybe topaz or something, then it would be more interesting as well, because the light refracted behind it would also be blue and would contrast nicely with the light colored paper. 6 |
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04/28/2005 07:26:14 PM |
| nice shot and a really nice choice of tones |
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04/28/2005 03:49:16 PM |
| The lighting doesn`t seem right. |
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04/28/2005 02:00:09 PM |
| The lighting choice does not fit the subject. There jewel feels out of place, and the focus is too much toward the right edge of the picture. |
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04/28/2005 11:51:42 AM |
| Good idea for a simple image. |
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04/27/2005 10:43:09 PM |
| Love the texture of the background, and the central point of focus seems to be perfectly aligned in the rule of thirds grid. However, it's hard for me to tell what the item is. The title indicates that it's a jewel, but is it a jewel in some sort of setting? A ring? A bit better lighting on the item would have helped me. |
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04/27/2005 11:21:19 AM |
| Meets the challenge. I would have liked to have seen a little crisper picture of the jewell or perhaps more definition to see the stone (reflections ect). |
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