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04/11/2003 01:06:08 PM |
| THANK YOU EVERYONE, I DEFINETLY FIND YOUR COMMENTS HELPFUL.... |
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04/11/2003 08:29:35 AM |
Critique Club here:
My first impression was: simple, good deep DOF, no "wow" factor.
The composition is good, the symmetry effect is there for sure. Using a building to display symmetry was a good idea. However, the symmetry in this image is not fully balanced. You could have overcome this in two ways, either moving your shooting position more to the left, or by rotating the canvas a little clockwise in the post processing phase.
The lighting is a little on the dark side, this could have been taken care of by adjusting the levels in post processing or by adjusting the exposure setting one stop on your camera before taking the shot.
The clouds and sky look awesome and give your image a lot of charachter. The longer I look at this photo the more I like it. Good job.
Gary |
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04/06/2003 11:30:46 PM |
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04/03/2003 09:30:14 AM |
| use all the pixels you are allowed - no need to make it tiny. |
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04/01/2003 02:19:54 PM |
| nice clear image, good idea |
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04/01/2003 01:46:27 PM |
| good job, the symetry pulls the picture together. |
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03/31/2003 10:09:37 PM |
| Oooohhh... Love the tones in the clouds. Nice perspective, too! |
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03/31/2003 06:49:43 PM |
| nice composition,. Could be more balanced for the "symmetry" effect. Would be even more dramatic with more contrasting light |
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03/31/2003 02:08:57 PM |
| Very nice image. The sky looks very neat for the photo. I think that the object taken is a little too dark though, because it just looks like a triangle. Good job. |
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03/31/2003 01:47:46 PM |
| I like the texture of this photo. |
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03/31/2003 10:38:47 AM |
| light taking away from dark side of building |
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03/31/2003 04:01:22 AM |
| Pic is very small - I guess it's 'straight to the point' then! Not a bad pic but a little asymmetric. |
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03/31/2003 02:47:55 AM |
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