great face. that car bumper is disturbing, and compositionally, i feel this image could be improved. but great face again, and quite a moment for a capture.
i know you're just kicking yourself over not being able to get a better angle on your subject, one without the foremost closest person... nice capture, excellent expression, and very nice treatment. you might consider cropping that person out altogether. it appears that you have enough detail not to lose too much by giving that much of the image up. just my opinion, though. all the same, nice work. good luck!
What a great portrait! I almost know the guy. Also I LOVE your color conversion and Hope there are detailed instructions to follow. The closer boy is hard to identify as a human and he obscures the kid with the glasses. 9