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04/05/2005 12:54:46 PM |
| Nice shot, but I think I'm missing the relation to the challenge. |
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04/04/2005 01:45:37 PM |
| The bird is slightly out of focus and too small in the frame. I'm also having trouble linking this to the challenge of "In the Beginning". |
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04/04/2005 09:32:29 AM |
| I like this shot..its short and simple. I like how it is just white and then you see the bird in flight. Ncie shot. |
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04/04/2005 04:37:12 AM |
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04/01/2005 11:09:37 PM |
| Very nicely simplistic. Getting that stretch of the wings must have been a challenge! |
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04/01/2005 08:42:52 AM |
| I like the overall concept but the title fails to convey the theme. "First Flight" or "Flying School" or something to that effect might have worked better. I also find the focus is too soft. |
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03/31/2005 11:58:22 AM |
| Maybe not enough "beginning" with or without the title! Nice image, but just not clear enough or sharp enough to be a great photo. |
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03/30/2005 04:06:03 PM |
| It's too bad you couldn't get closer.. it's so hard to capture birds in flight.. good attempt! |
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03/30/2005 01:04:13 PM |
| Negative space. It's the rage. But I'm an Apple fan. Apple ad agencies almost singlehandedly created negative space in the late 1980's. And as with any 20 year old fad, I look forward to the time its overuse is over. If I were going to do this photo, rotate and crop so that the bird was near a corner and facing (just about) the opposite corner. But then I'm not a graphic artist by training. |
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