This has a good feel overall, and exposure and sharpness are good. To me the composition does not have good aesthetics due to the strong presence of the stems and where they end at the top. Subjectively, my brain sees that part of the picture is missing, more strongly than it sees a nice shot of the glass with some color balance.
I am tempted to say that if you cut the shot at the top of the vase to crop most of the neck out it might work better, but there are downsides to that as well.
The above analysis may just be my own tastes, but since you asked for comments, there they are for your consideration.
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