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03/29/2003 02:55:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Gekker....
This is an excellent macro photo... the composition is good as well... it's nicely unbalanced... I wouldn't change anything about the composition here at all. The detail is well defined.
Your depth of field selection at F2.8 could be just a little shallow for this image. The orange quarter on the left is not nearly as sharp as the quarter on the right side of the image. I think that a little more depth of field... possibly F4.5 or F5.6 would solidify the sharpness in this image quite a bit.
More depth of field would also lengthen your exposure time, which leads me to the issue of the lighting in this photo. I believe the light is just slightly too bright in this photo. It's not way too bright, but just a little. Maybe an image exposure of F4.5 and a 1/16th shutter speed would soften up the light just a little also...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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03/19/2003 06:57:13 PM |
| mmmmm Very nice close-up. It's so vivid I can almost smell it. |
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03/19/2003 02:42:27 AM |
| You've really brought out the freshness and juiciness of those oranges, yum! |
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03/18/2003 11:59:59 PM |
nice perfect color and exposure.
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03/17/2003 05:00:37 PM |
| Nice bright color and good focus. I would have liked to see a little more (1/2 inch) on the top. |
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03/17/2003 01:53:09 PM |
| The lighting has really made the oranges look succullent. I like it. |
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03/17/2003 10:59:05 AM |
| Good clear picture, good light. |
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03/17/2003 03:20:57 AM |
looks delicious
composiotion is good
Meets Challenge
Visual Impact - very high; nice focus; very sharp
suggestion: perhaps a wee bit too much light on the orange on the right? |
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