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04/07/2003 09:08:07 AM |
Thanks for your comments! Very well appreciated!
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03/26/2003 10:26:12 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
I think the composition of this works well in part because the eye "enters" the frame in the top left and is able to follow the water down into the vase. The shadow behind it also sets up some nice converging lines.
TECHNIQUE
The focus here is great, adn you have captured the falling water nicely. I like the overall blue tone, but in the bottom, around the base of the vase, it looks a little odd to me. The blue looks almost blown out and causes it to seem an unnatural teal or aqua color.
OVERALL EFFECT
This is a very interesting shot, adn the blue (with the water) makes it feel peaceful and relaxing to me. It may have been interesting, though not better to crop the bottom of the vase off, then turn the picture upside down. Also, if the blue hues were not acquired in post-processing, a bright yellow or red flower may have added some color contrast. Again, not necessarily making it better, just making it different. |
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03/23/2003 04:31:30 PM |
i like this how did you do the borders? and is that water going in or out?
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03/23/2003 08:08:46 AM |
| Nice and creative. Good luck |
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03/22/2003 10:48:53 PM |
| "Over filling a flower vase"? Nice shot. The angle works - so many do not. Like the colors. |
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03/20/2003 11:24:07 PM |
| very good I like the colors |
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03/19/2003 04:37:09 PM |
| Very strong lines-- I can almost hear the water hitting the bottom. Well done! |
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03/19/2003 12:05:18 AM |
| Nice effect... try to "unblue" a little |
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03/18/2003 07:39:20 PM |
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03/18/2003 07:27:58 AM |
Nice idea and nice angles.
Personally not so keen on the water at the base of the vase and on the outside of it...
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03/17/2003 10:46:32 PM |
Love colour of the vase, water, everything. Like the colored shadow too.
Lighting adds a lot to this photograph.
Your idea is very original and focus looks good.
Good visual impact also. |
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03/17/2003 03:52:10 PM |
| Interesting thought! Good picture! |
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03/17/2003 12:30:21 PM |
| Interesting perspective. Love the play on the blue theme. |
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03/17/2003 11:06:25 AM |
| excellent perspective and I love the blue tone... the strong diagonal is also very appealing... nice work :) - setzler |
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03/17/2003 09:54:56 AM |
| Awesome, love the perspective! |
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