I think the lighting in this is fantastic, and I wouldn't get down about it at all! :) I think the low score is due to not being able to see your face in a portrait challenge.
I really like this. I'm not even going to try to explain why because I don't think I really know!
I think the edges of your head could do to be softer, it kind of stands out too much with strong edges. Otherwise this is faultless.
Eerie surreal and very creative. Like a lot. I will say it is not a photo to do well in these Challenges but it has an artistic quality and emotional impact that sets it apart. Good work.
Returning for comment. You had a good idea, but overall this image is just not at visually appealing as some of the other submissions to my eye. I can see...something, just not sure what. On the plus side - you took a risk and that's great!