Used the 50mm F/1.8. I hate the bad nose shadow and hotspot on her forehead but I have no studio lights yet. I'll reshoot this again with better lighting and take more time to paint as well.
Absolutely incredible! Thanks to mystical_princess I found this image. I'm VERY impressed. LOVE it - instant Favorite! The softness, the beauty, the contrast, the harsh elements, it's just great!
I think your light is fine. Just raise it up a bit and pull it closer to her and you should have a better shadow and it should minimize the hot spot, but really beautiful, and the color is great!