gina
I have two criticisms of this image: the composition and the tocal range.
Compositionally, the points of focus are the center of the roses; the lower right rose is well placed, but the left rose could be moved into the image more, to place it's center in a more powerful position, and to eliminate that black space between the roses that prevents them from being one 'subject'. The frame could be opened to prevent the top of the frame from decapitating so much of the upper rose.
Exposure-wise, this needs to be opened up a half stop or so. The colors suffer from desaturation, and the specular lights aren't crisp enough. After lightening this image up, the details could be enhanced by tweaking the contrast.
Just my thoughts. |