Not bad, maybe a bit overexposed (the building in the background), but it helps the opposite. For me, this shot cries for a symmetrical composition. Compose the "window" of the old one to the new to the center, if you feel the shot this way boring, rotate it it a bit, but leave it centered. Simple subjects need simple, but not ad-hoc compositions to work well.
I see you din't give a title. "Window to the new" or something like that came to my mind when I saw your shot. Feel your photo! If you couldn't find a title, you didn't feel it enough. |