what is the object with the color squares on it? My eye is drawn to that because it's a dark spot, like right front corner - If my ad was candles I would have used more candles and perhaps just candles.
very effective picture; vivid coloring, but the composition seems a little busy on the left. Keeps drawing my eye over to that side, trying to decide what all the objects are. Otherwise this pic would be "simple elegance".
very warm looking, the candles make the lighting very soft and ambient -- good for this shot, I think. Maybe needs to be cropped a little more on the right.
but whats it advertising? Candles? Nic epic but it seems you took a pic that you liked and then shoved it in the ad challenge without it realy being an advert
I don't have any suggestions but the arrangement seems off to me. It doesn't flow or feel balanced. The candles are all in 2 lines in the middle and it seems like something should be more to the front. I hope that makes some sense.
The composition on this shot may have been a little better if the candles were on the lower portion of the frame rather than centered across the middle... Good job!
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