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03/15/2003 05:23:15 AM |
Critique by Silver Fox
Nice overall depth of field on the eggs and the egg carton but a more shallow depth of field may have been better used in this photograph.
Great idea to choose brown eggs instead of white, but you made them just slightly too brown. The texture in the first eggshell seems okay
but the rest of the are blurred so you can't tell.
The table and light just behond the egg carton are very distracting, moves your subjects eyes away from your main focus almost immediately.
Would like to have seen sharper focus on the first two eggs and the first two or three humps of the carton.
You had a great idea and show lots of imagination for the challenge.
I also like the way you use the rule of 3rds here.
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03/08/2003 02:02:45 PM |
| The patterns of the carton enhance the feeling of loneliness here. I just wish the eggs were more in focus as the title suggests they should be. |
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03/08/2003 10:46:15 AM |
| I like the concept. And the lighting is right on. |
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03/07/2003 02:40:27 PM |
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03/06/2003 09:27:06 PM |
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03/06/2003 03:19:06 PM |
| I love the DOF in this photo. Nice texture in the eggshells. 7 |
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03/06/2003 10:01:22 AM |
| Picture appears under-exposed, colour of shell is darker than normal. Good perspective. |
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03/05/2003 06:22:52 PM |
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03/05/2003 09:14:31 AM |
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03/05/2003 08:35:41 AM |
| nice use of perspective here... i think this shot would also be strong with a shallow depth of field... nice work :) - setzler |
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03/04/2003 02:20:36 PM |
| i find the space and stuff in the top left corner a bit distracting. maybe putting a white sheet of paper there during the photo to allow the focus to be more on the eggs and carton would have made the photo stronger. |
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03/04/2003 12:02:29 PM |
| I like this idea a lot but think you could have shown the idea of "lonely" better with just one egg! Interesting use of repetitive form and contrast! |
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03/03/2003 12:37:34 AM |
| Little sharper focus on the lead egg and leaving the DOF the same, may have given more impact, in my opinion |
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