I like this picture, nice candid moment. This is what this challenge is all about. Perhaps cropping out the gabage can would have made a little better. Maybe maybe not. Still a nice picture.
Real shame about the tilt here, because this has great charm and character. Looks like an old French B-movie. You'd score much higher if you'd managed to notice this quite major flaw.
Very nice indeed. I find myself wondering if the young girl is inside or if she is a reflection, of course she is inside but still I wonder. The use (or lack of) colouring is great.
Everything works here, and I love the shot. Only thing is that it's off kilter a little with horizontal alignment. For me, that's distracting, and takes away from the mood.