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01/04/2005 05:54:15 AM |
| ... or my grandfather's computer :D |
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01/03/2005 07:43:47 PM |
| too bad the background is not very appealing for this fantastic underwood typewriter |
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01/03/2005 12:43:53 PM |
| i like this one..a little more editing on the spot refelctions in the background and the backdrop would really improve it |
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01/02/2005 10:25:20 PM |
| nice find, but the set-up is like the photo was taken to sell it on e-bay :) |
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12/31/2004 11:00:10 PM |
| I see why you picked this as your subject. I think that you could have made a more compelling image out of a closeup that perhaps includes the brand name Underwood, some of the keys below, and some of the dies all lined up above. |
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12/31/2004 03:23:21 PM |
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12/31/2004 12:57:05 PM |
Composition: 5, Back drops are a bummer. Maybe if you had draped the sheet so it would have been continuous, without the break between table and wall, it might become more a photograph. Looks more like just another typewriter this way.
Technical: 4
Appeal: 3
Challenge: 10
Overall Calculated Average Score: 6, Be nice to add a secretary typing. |
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12/31/2004 12:42:31 PM |
| I like the object shown here....it's interesting to study. Perhaps a closer view with a more interesting perspective of it. Good job. |
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12/31/2004 03:49:15 AM |
| I love the subject, but I wish you had straightened out the sheet so that the wrinkles don't reveal shadows. Maybe a secondary light on the background could have helped blow it out completely. Nice effort and creativity! |
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12/30/2004 11:46:13 PM |
It's a wonderful object but the lighting and background don't begin to do it justice. As a sidenote, how is a tpewriter the
grandfather" of a computer? Wouldn't that be an adding machine? Or better yet, an abacus? |
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