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01/03/2005 01:40:33 PM |
| Thanks, everyone, for your comments. I guess the consensus is that I should have cropped out the edges of the bowl. Ironically, my first take on this was a much closer view of just the face, but it seemed too boring to me. So I chose the wider view. Nevertheless, I'm quite pleased with the voting. Thanks! |
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01/02/2005 11:26:19 PM |
Great idea, great composition, but to me it looks flat both color wise and in depth. Moving your lighting more to one side or the other (I would say to photographers right) would help with the depth issue.
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01/02/2005 03:04:54 PM |
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01/02/2005 01:28:50 PM |
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12/31/2004 05:15:12 PM |
| hahaha. Very nice. Creative. Funny! |
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12/31/2004 07:30:11 AM |
great pic, well executed. i can learn so much from it. thanks for sharing it.
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12/30/2004 08:27:03 PM |
| Good idea, color and clarity. Just one small thing would be the reflections on the bowl or container and the blue, they compete with the subject |
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12/29/2004 06:03:51 PM |
| super creative -- would like the pasta to fill the frame as the glass stuff on the lower right and left detract (imho) |
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12/29/2004 11:28:58 AM |
| Well executed, I wonder if a tighter crop without the edges of the glass would have a greater impact. |
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12/29/2004 10:48:09 AM |
| this is a great hidden face! i'm scoring it a 7, but think that this would definitely be worth reshooting with a different container, one large enough to allow you to crop out the distracting edges. you might also want to work on evening out the lighting. even so, good job! |
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12/29/2004 06:13:56 AM |
| I think you could have given this more impact with it cropped round the 'face' |
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12/28/2004 11:05:52 AM |
| A much closer cropping would work better here. |
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12/27/2004 05:52:18 PM |
| haha, oh man, I love this one...it's so happy... |
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12/27/2004 04:29:38 PM |
| Good seeing. It may be more effective if it were a bit closer. |
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12/27/2004 08:45:41 AM |
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12/27/2004 04:11:52 AM |
| Nice. Maybe a tighter crop on the pasta, to remove the bowl completely... IMO |
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12/27/2004 01:15:27 AM |
| One of the funniest faces in the challenge. |
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