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03/09/2003 09:36:05 PM |
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Still laughing about the "brain stew" comment! well, I gather from the comments that most people didn't like the goo in the middle, myself included. Otherwise this is an excellent shot. Lovely lighting and focus is spot on! The contrast between the yellow and black is strong and has impact. Without the slime, perhaps even scraping it off, or chosing a composition to exclude most of it.. I like the corner composition, so I would chose for getting rid of the goo but keeping the same composition. Everything else about the shot is perfect, so perhaps a reshoot would provide a very sellable stock picture. Good Luck in the next challenge |
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03/02/2003 11:56:12 PM |
| I can tell it's corn, but it does not look like anything I would want to eat. |
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03/02/2003 11:04:00 AM |
| I don't find this photo very appealing. My eyes are drawn to the core of the cob which looks kind of soggy and slimy! The composition is nice though. |
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03/01/2003 08:46:29 AM |
| Interesting photo. I had to look at the page again...I almost did a In-depth critique on this for the Yellow challenge!! Good macro photo. I think the light is good, the focus is good and the color is great. I'm not wild about the way the cob looks though. Maybe if that was better lit, it would be better, but as it is, it looks pretty unsightly. I think you should've done more of the water droplets on the kernals. There is a small one on top and I think it looks pretty good. |
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02/27/2003 06:05:01 PM |
| This is a really fascinating shot! The center of the corn doesn't look too tasty, I might have stuck with just the kernals, but it is a very cool shot with excellent lighting still! |
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02/27/2003 02:09:36 PM |
| OK, how did you get THIS close, and get THAT good of DOF?? I HAVE to know! Very nice shot, the color is great, and I like the composition. |
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02/27/2003 07:51:35 AM |
| This is an amazing macro shot. Everything fits here, the composition the lighting, the title and it meets the challenge fully. Congratulations! |
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02/26/2003 12:06:46 AM |
| LOL, there's a missing piece of corn! Plus the cob (lower left) isn't appealing to look at. Lighting is nice however. |
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02/25/2003 12:39:31 PM |
I would suggest that you might have been better off to shoot more of the corn.
The center is not appealing. Nice clarity around the edges. |
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02/25/2003 08:23:56 AM |
| Great idea for a stock shot. However, i think the barren area of most of the bottom left is detracting from the value of the image. 5 Jak |
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02/25/2003 12:38:18 AM |
| The kernels work really well - nice shading and detail. The cob part is a big distraction to me. Top half very good, bottom half ... |
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02/24/2003 11:11:35 PM |
| Nice contrast and colors,well focused, but don't like that piece of coen skin hanging |
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02/24/2003 08:29:30 PM |
| phenomenal shot... the detail here is excellent... great work :) = 10 - setzler |
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02/24/2003 07:10:58 PM |
| Great lighting, focus, composition and content! Destined for publication, surely! |
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02/24/2003 03:40:18 PM |
| It's a good idea but it's not very appealing to me. I think it's the mush center and the popped out kernel that I don't like. I think the lighting is very good and it is a very nice macro. |
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02/24/2003 09:16:43 AM |
| The wet look th the cob center is kind of gross.Turning the ear so the center wasn't as prominent and showed more kernels may have worked better. |
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02/24/2003 07:52:44 AM |
| the corner things look gorgeous, but the centre looks like brain stew. To be honest, I would never consider putting this on print because of that. Of course, just my subjective opinion. (5) |
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02/24/2003 12:18:40 AM |
| Nice macro, would've been very good in the Yellow challenge. I can picture this hanging on the wall in a restaurant. I think the water droplet on the left side second kernel from the left detracts, only because it breaks the (effective) curve. |
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