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Marilyn Monroe of the 21st Century
Marilyn Monroe of the 21st Century
KarGirl


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Wind (Basic Editing II)
Camera: Pentax Optio S4i
Location: South Africa
Date: Dec 12, 2004
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 50
Galleries: Snapshot, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Dec 12, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 157 out of 199
Avg (all users): 4.4047
Avg (commenters): 5.1111
Avg (participants): 4.3636
Avg (non-participants): 4.4218
Views since voting: 1084
Views during voting: 656
Votes: 299
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/21/2004 08:37:05 PM
Good idea, the lighting is a bit weak. Just my point of view and sharing it.
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12/21/2004 05:57:02 PM
The lighting really lets this dowm - the flash shadow is too noticable. Either off camera flash, a bounce off a reflector, or a softbox (white linen diffuser) might help
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/20/2004 03:12:11 AM
i'm no good at studio shots, but this seems flat to me. If i knew much about lights id give more specific suggestions than this- but it seems you need them, and perhaps a less textured and softer backdrop.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/16/2004 12:54:31 PM
you really think so!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/16/2004 02:36:16 AM
More like Madonna...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2004 11:35:32 PM
The pose looks uncomfortable and the facial expression is pretty uninspired. I think it would have been better with a different choice of location. The interior wall and the resulting shadows hurt the shot for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2004 06:05:07 PM
The light on this shot is not very good... kills all the potential, imo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2004 12:49:58 PM
Composition: 4, Technical: 6, Appeal: 5, Challenge: 5, Overall Calculated Average Score: 5

the biggest flaw I would see with this, it is too obviously staged. Had this been in a location, a setting, it would have more pop. Also, the dress and the hair seem to be blown in opposite directions.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2004 09:07:43 AM
Photo is a little snapshot like. Great capture of her hair blowing.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/15/2004 03:05:30 AM
...Not quite. She is pleasant on the eyes, however. Lighting is rather harsh and there is a stair-step artifact introduced with overzealous edge sharpening.
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