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12/21/2004 08:37:05 PM |
Good idea, the lighting is a bit weak. Just my point of view and sharing it. |
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12/21/2004 05:57:02 PM |
The lighting really lets this dowm - the flash shadow is too noticable. Either off camera flash, a bounce off a reflector, or a softbox (white linen diffuser) might help |
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12/20/2004 03:12:11 AM |
i'm no good at studio shots, but this seems flat to me. If i knew much about lights id give more specific suggestions than this- but it seems you need them, and perhaps a less textured and softer backdrop. |
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12/16/2004 12:54:31 PM |
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12/16/2004 02:36:16 AM |
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12/15/2004 11:35:32 PM |
The pose looks uncomfortable and the facial expression is pretty uninspired. I think it would have been better with a different choice of location. The interior wall and the resulting shadows hurt the shot for me. |
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12/15/2004 06:05:07 PM |
The light on this shot is not very good... kills all the potential, imo. |
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12/15/2004 12:49:58 PM |
Composition: 4, Technical: 6, Appeal: 5, Challenge: 5, Overall Calculated Average Score: 5
the biggest flaw I would see with this, it is too obviously staged. Had this been in a location, a setting, it would have more pop. Also, the dress and the hair seem to be blown in opposite directions. |
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12/15/2004 09:07:43 AM |
Photo is a little snapshot like. Great capture of her hair blowing. |
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12/15/2004 03:05:30 AM |
...Not quite. She is pleasant on the eyes, however. Lighting is rather harsh and there is a stair-step artifact introduced with overzealous edge sharpening. |
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