Greetings from the Critique Club...
Not sure I like the crop. Seems like you could have included more at the top but also more at the bottom and left more black all around as open space even on the left where it seems like it just faded to black.
Your subject is definately interesting -- seems like an old clay model of some sort. The neck is definately broken, but I can't say I feel most viewers would notice that if the title didn't point it out.
There's a lot of potential I think with this subject, but nothing just stands out, grabs me, or pulls me into the image. Instead, my eyes just seem to wander all around. Just my humble opinion :-D |
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