Ah rhythm is two ways here, one as music and one as form, good one! The light seems a little too bright on some parts of the instrument, was it a flash? The crop is good here!
Nice composition, but the lighting seems to be just a bit harsh. The highlights are just a tad strong... maybe some minor diffusion of the light would help correct this :) - setzler
this brings back memories! my dad had one like this!
light is a bit too intense in some places, and makes it flat in others. did you just flash?.. or maybe your light source was too close...
anyway. nice idea.