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Lay low, Yellow
Lay low, Yellow
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Yellow (Classic Editing)
Camera: Kodak DX3900
Location: My room
Date: Feb 16, 2003
Aperture: 2,8
Shutter: 1/32
Galleries: Still Life, Studio
Date Uploaded: Feb 16, 2003

 crappy idea, my first try in reflections. Studio reflections that is. personally I prefer to go out of the house...

I used the glass plate of my IKEA coffe table, placed a dark-blue fleece blanket (wich grandma gave me) under the glass. plain and simple, sorry for the idea, but I was out of time :)

Statistics
Place: 80 out of 252
Avg (all users): 5.5960
Avg (commenters): 6.9091
Avg (participants): 5.5882
Avg (non-participants): 5.6129
Views since voting: 1044
Votes: 198
Comments: 13
Favorites: 2 (view)

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 03/01/2003 11:26:13 AM
Critique Club Comment:

This is yellow. I don't feel moved by the shot though. The negative space although a good idea, is probably too much. Moving the lemon to the right some to add a little more balance on the left side would help equalize the framing. I think the horizontal placement is good. Your lighting is oversaturating the lemon. So much so that the details are lost. You may want to try bouncing the light off of a wall or ceiling, or diffusing it with a thing white paper or cloth. This will give you a more even lighting and allow more of the texture to show through. Your depth of field and post processing are both good.

I think that if you had more time to work on your lighting, the use of the mirror and the lemon could have created a wonderful shot, as it is, the lack of time available is evident.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/22/2003 12:53:04 PM
Interesting lighting. Don't like the placement in the far left bottom. I would have liked it at the thirds or at the side with the top cut off or the right so that it wasn't in a square frame.
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 02/21/2003 03:10:30 AM
too much space
 02/18/2003 11:25:39 AM
Love the lighting and reflection here. A little overexposed (lighting) on a bit of the lemon, but an excellent photo. 8
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 02/18/2003 11:20:39 AM
Yet another lemon
 02/17/2003 10:10:35 PM
Eye-catching!
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 02/17/2003 10:01:29 PM
Way to go!
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 02/17/2003 08:29:27 PM
wow. very good composition. The lighting and the negative space work well together to create a striking effect.
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 02/17/2003 05:03:05 PM
I don't really like the placement of the lemon or the use of reflection.
 02/17/2003 09:32:06 AM
Like the negative space
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 02/17/2003 03:33:51 AM
just a bit too much neg space here
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 02/17/2003 01:07:38 AM
Really nice shot, well thought out and set up. Nice composition and borders, definately meets challenge. high score :)
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 02/17/2003 12:28:41 AM
I like the negative space. Very good framing and I especially like the mirror. good job
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