Challenge:Yellow (Classic Editing) Camera:Canon PowerShot G2 Location: Central Park, Fremont, California Date: Feb 16, 2003 Aperture: 4.0 ISO: 50 Shutter: 1/640 Galleries:Landscape, Nature Date Uploaded: Feb 16, 2003
If you can --getting closer would have eliminated most of the background which is distracting.It keeps taking your attention away from the flowers in the fore ground.
Needs a bit more or less of the cropped bit on the left. The space on the right is dead, I'd crop that out. The bright spots on the horizon are distracting, I'd crop the top odd this pic. or try and get more in to make this a landscape with foreground interest. The main subject is OK, but a bit uninteresting. There are better times of day to be shooting this sort of pic, it looks a bit dull, but without the warmth of the evening sun.
Very nice composition however I would have cropped the flower petals on the left out cause they are a bit distracting from the primary subject. also, could use a bit more contrast for my taste to draw more attention to it. Just my thoughts - hope they are helpful as I am not an expert!