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Challenge: Extended Free Study 2020-07 (Extended Editing)
Date: Jul 26, 2020
Aperture: 22.0
ISO: 50
Shutter: 5
Date Uploaded: Aug 14, 2020

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Statistics
Place: 26 out of 50
Avg (all users): 5.7105
Avg (participants): 5.8333
Avg (non-participants): 5.5000
Views since voting: 136
Views during voting: 77
Votes: 38
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0

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 08/22/2020 10:29:47 AM
Thank you so much Mark for the details and yes I agreed, I made some mistakes and really took down the shot. I will keep your suggestion in mind next time when I am going to take the shots! Again thank you such mark!

Originally posted by mpeters:
A couple of comments -- take them from a my perspective as an aspiring landscape photographer. The scene is pleasing and looks like it has potential for sure. Suggest bringing down the green saturation on the rocks. Always check your horizon - on DPC(and elsewhere), crooked horizons grab the viewers attention and that typically isn't the photographer's intent. Regarding your positioning/composition - suggest a camera location to the right of pictured. You could have kept the vivid green rocks in the frame but used the line of breaking surf to create a stronger leading diagonal from foreground to background. The water movement around the rocks in the sea would have been retained and although the sun would may have moved to the right in your composition, I believe the overall composition would have been improved.

One mans opinion. Happy shooting!
08/22/2020 10:28:42 AM
I realize after submitting the image :D there is no excuse for that but yes it was a mistake :)

Originally posted by MaryO:
Your horizon is a bit tilted; was that intentional? I can't tell.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/21/2020 08:17:33 PM
Beautiful scene. Should be near the top.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/15/2020 04:08:59 PM
A couple of comments -- take them from a my perspective as an aspiring landscape photographer. The scene is pleasing and looks like it has potential for sure. Suggest bringing down the green saturation on the rocks. Always check your horizon - on DPC(and elsewhere), crooked horizons grab the viewers attention and that typically isn't the photographer's intent. Regarding your positioning/composition - suggest a camera location to the right of pictured. You could have kept the vivid green rocks in the frame but used the line of breaking surf to create a stronger leading diagonal from foreground to background. The water movement around the rocks in the sea would have been retained and although the sun would may have moved to the right in your composition, I believe the overall composition would have been improved.

One mans opinion. Happy shooting!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 08/15/2020 09:43:43 AM
Your horizon is a bit tilted; was that intentional? I can't tell.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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