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Brazil - Rhythmic Epicentre
Brazil - Rhythmic Epicentre
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Challenge: Rhythm (Classic Editing)
Collection: Abstract
Camera: Canon PowerShot G2
Location: Studio
Date: Feb 12, 2003
Galleries: Macro, Action
Date Uploaded: Feb 12, 2003

 People might not like the centered composition but I think it helps to better show the repeated pattern and rhythm that the ripples create.

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 08/24/2005 11:36:17 AM
Originally posted by tomzinho:
seu photo nao e um photo de 'rhythm', mais era muito bem feito. mais sem duvida voce tinha muito mais oportunidades de ritmo no brasil! por favor!


Ok, I'm brazilian and I didn't quite get what u mean here!LoL
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 02/28/2003 01:15:35 AM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
I agree about the centered composition. It does show the pattern nicely. I might suggest showing more of the green though. It sets up a nice contrast with the yellow and blue, and the yellow diagonals lead the eyes out that side of the picture. It just seems to feel off-balanced to me. Maybe the white area with text needs to be further over to the left, leading more into the picture, or something of that nature.

TECHNIQUE
Great focus and lighting. I cannot think of anything I would do to make this a better shot, technically. (A lot of help I am, huh?)

OVERALL EFFECT
This is a great idea, but I am afraid some viewers might not catch the pattern quickly because it is not blatantly obvious that that is the "rhythm." Technically, it is an awesome shot, but it does feel a bit unbalanced to me.
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 02/24/2003 12:25:35 PM
Och, aye I ken what ya wer tryin ta doo her, meir splasin arund

Message edited by author 2003-02-24 12:26:10.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/22/2003 08:06:25 PM
Quelle belle photo. J'adore les couleurs et les belles vagues. Très original. Bonne et chance mon ami.
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 02/22/2003 06:44:05 PM
Das Bild gefaelt mir sehr! Die Flagge sieht so klar aus unter'm Wasser und ich mag gerne wie die Farben so deutlich durchscheinen. Die kleinen Wellen bringen sehr viel Charachter rein. Ein tolles Bild, gratuliere!
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 02/17/2003 01:02:42 AM
seu photo nao e um photo de 'rhythm', mais era muito bem feito. mais sem duvida voce tinha muito mais oportunidades de ritmo no brasil! por favor!
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