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12/01/2004 01:08:23 AM |
| well??? who wrote the text? we're all dying to know! where'd you get it? |
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11/30/2004 08:01:56 PM |
| I like this. It would be nice if the text was clearer all the way to the edge of the image. |
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11/30/2004 07:47:14 PM |
| Where did the fingertips go? |
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11/28/2004 02:07:23 PM |
| Good use of b&w. Nice depth of field. 8 |
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11/28/2004 05:07:25 AM |
Pen is mightier than the sword?
There appears to be what seems like an artificial vignetting effect in this shot perhaps created or accentuated by post processing. Helps to draw focus to the sig. Well done. |
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11/26/2004 01:42:08 PM |
| the big question for me is, "did you write the text, or did you find it somewhere?" this could have been a killer entry, if you had rotated the signature into the bottom right, and had included a bit more funny, authoritative text (like "failure to comply will result in forfeiture of first born son..."). shallow dof also takes away from inviting viewer to read deeper into the image. keep in mind, scoring here is a matter of grabbing and keeping voter attention, not allowing them to view and click away. all the same, i like your take on the challenge, and wish you good luck. |
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11/26/2004 01:34:47 PM |
| Nice tone + DOF. The vignetting might work better without the darkness in the top left. |
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11/25/2004 05:48:39 AM |
| I guess the topic explains the shot, however it seems my english isn't good enough for me to understand it :) :P It's an 8 from me :) |
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11/25/2004 05:30:44 AM |
| Interesting text in the contract... |
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11/24/2004 07:56:07 PM |
hehe looks like you had some fun with that contract
nicely done |
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11/24/2004 04:35:00 PM |
| you made me look! I'm trying to figure out everything the text is disclaiming... |
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11/24/2004 11:30:04 AM |
| Very nice composition, and good choice for b/w photo. A recommendation: hand holding the pen might have been better here, as that would have reduced the shadow of the pen on the paper |
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11/24/2004 12:57:30 AM |
| Nice use of light and shadow. Great clean lines in the crisp focus, letters, and pen. I would have angled the pen from the other upper corner so that the signature was not obscured by the shadow from pen. The artist did an excellent job by choosing to make the letters so clear and tight at the bottom of the page and then sliding out of focus as they move up the page. Outstanding choice of angle for that aspect. Great image. |
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11/24/2004 12:29:00 AM |
wounderful shot.
i lov the grayscale of the whole image everything fits well
1 thing though i am bothared by the sarrifs on the x instead of it looking leagle it kinda seems home done.(should have changed the font for that)
thats all GL,-BC |
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