I really like how you framed this photo. I would like to see the bushes in the midrange a bit crisper. I think a wider range of values would up the intensity and impact of this piece.
hrmm -- really good idea. The sky is a tad blown out and everything's realy dark below that. Seems like it just rained and there's a slight hayse in the air which messes with the lighting a lot, maybe too much for my personal taste.