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02/17/2003 03:23:38 PM |
Critique Club:
Meeting the Challenge: Does this very well with the repition of the headstones.
Composition: I do think including the whole tree might have made this a bit better. I like the tree in there, however, as it tends to add a little interest into what could have been a rather monotonous gray photo.
Technical Quality: Very well executed, the colors seem to be very right and the focus and dof good. The lighting somehow lends a coldness to the photo, although there are shadows present so it doesn't look flat. The snow adds to the starkness of the cemetary as well.
Creativity: Good, wouldn't have thought of a cemetary for rhythm.
Conclusion: A nice photo, well exectuted, might have been composed a little differently. Good job.
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02/17/2003 12:39:13 PM |
| Man, can I NOT pick the winners or what! I really liked this shot. Nicely done and very emotional (well, it could be a personal thing with my Dad dying recently and putting him to rest at a National Cemetary, too.) |
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02/16/2003 10:30:04 AM |
| Seems a little too busy. A closer crop may have had a more dramatic effect. |
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02/16/2003 12:57:43 AM |
| Moving - especially with the spectre of war upon us. WIsh you could have gotten a lower angle. |
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02/14/2003 06:45:41 PM |
| I really like this! The shadows on the snow with the gravestones is very, very nice!! Color seems good. Focus is perfect. Nice emotional shot. 9 Swash |
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02/14/2003 05:06:57 PM |
| I saw this one I think on your camera screen, but i still like it. The tree breaks up the monotony. |
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02/12/2003 02:40:06 PM |
| It is cool how the tombs in the foreground look like they are swallowed by the earth. Great work at keeping the snow white and not blue! |
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02/11/2003 11:35:51 PM |
| Like the repetition without being boring in this shot, also lighting and composition. |
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02/11/2003 06:03:48 PM |
| It's an ordinary shot, but the subject matter is compelling. |
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02/10/2003 06:46:01 PM |
Extremely great wonderful shot.
Fantastic!! Just good all over. I might of cut the tree out or used the whole tree...still it's a great shot...............love it. |
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02/10/2003 03:03:33 PM |
| The tree breaks up the pattern/ texture of this shot - I'd like to see it without that I think |
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02/10/2003 12:27:06 AM |
| very nice, I like the white on white effect, almost an erry decadence to it |
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