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02/17/2003 11:46:22 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This is very cool. I think that if you could've had your comments shown it would've helped the voters. Most of the time I don't think its an advantage, but in this case I do. I think that a lot of folks were wondering how it met the challenge. There's only one thing I think I'd change about the pic in terms of composition - I don't like all the space at the bottom of the pic. If it were me I'd have cropped it a bit tighter and put it at the bottom. I understand that you left the space on the bottom for the floating illusion, but I don't think it was very effective. But the actual bottle is very cool and I do think the concept is great also.
Technical - Just a little overexposed for my taste. Other than that, very very nicely done. Good clear photo. I can't tell if you did anything else to it processing, If you did, it looks great.
Overall - I would've figured this would've done very well, but I think people were wondering what it was and how it met the challenge. I can sort of see their point, but I still think it's a quality photo. I still think that lowering the subject in the frame would've proven beneficial. If I scroll up I'm looking for it right away but obviously its up toward the top. Hope this could be a little helpful to you. Good luck in future challenges. - Bob |
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02/16/2003 01:17:07 AM |
| Saki? I don't travel to Japan anymore and I miss a good saki. This captures the spirit well. |
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02/14/2003 04:10:23 AM |
| Weird and cool. I'm not sure how well it meets the challenge, but I love the way that vase shines out from the darkness as though it's hovering there in mid air. |
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02/11/2003 10:08:40 PM |
| Interesting shot, although I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at. Good focus and clarity. (I think!) |
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02/10/2003 07:18:41 PM |
| interesting but i would like to see it a little closer, maybe too much background. |
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