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02/23/2003 09:39:46 PM |
Critique Club
Composition-Content
Really great idea and composition, the person seems to be "hiding" in a good place as far as rule of thirds, but perhaps it is a little obvious, maybe if he could have been hidden a bit more...
Technical
Great focus, overall good quality. i think that the lighting is a little harsh, the details of the golf balls have been lost, perhaps toning it down a bit would have been good. However the overall lighting is even. The main thing about this shot, is the border, just too bright! I know that you had lots of comments about it, I don't think you lose points over it, but a simple black border, with perhaps a tiny yellow one inside would have been good.
My Opinion
I think that your composition and idea are great, it is eye-catching and original. Personally, I am not a golf fan, so it doesn't really appeal to me but it is colourful and meets the challenge well. Good Luck in the next challenge. |
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02/16/2003 10:35:15 PM |
This is VERY well done. Great focus and composition. The border might be a bit much though. |
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02/16/2003 10:42:28 AM |
COnsidering this was done in software, Waldo should have been better camoflauged. |
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02/15/2003 09:05:08 PM |
Get rid of that YELLOW border! Cute one. Nice sharp clean focus. Bright for sure. From the title I rather expected to see a "nut". Good one. |
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02/15/2003 06:12:06 AM |
I like your sense of humor. |
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02/14/2003 01:18:44 AM |
Good idea, don't care for the wide bright framing, however. |
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02/13/2003 06:53:10 PM |
I love it! it's obviously a cut out but I love it. I'M a big golfer . Good luck. Jacko 8 |
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02/13/2003 01:44:19 PM |
good idea, how did you manage to put the person on top of the golf balls? |
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02/13/2003 01:22:29 AM |
+ Great concept & composition
- the highlights wash out the detail of the golf balls, the border has to go, focus is soft overall
Could have been an 8 or 9, but with the flaws 6 |
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02/12/2003 10:46:41 AM |
Ver nice illusion, is that a photo you used there? It turned out well, nice and crisp! Good composition, I like it. |
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02/11/2003 07:16:35 PM |
Golf nut! Very colorful image. Glare is a tad bright on the whiter balls, but overall this is a well done shot. (Gotten any complaints about your yellow border?) Good focus, framing works. Challenge well met. 8 Swash |
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02/11/2003 06:11:25 PM |
I could be wrong but i think this will be in the top 3. It`s interesting and colourful and meets the challenge well. 10 |
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02/11/2003 05:14:56 PM |
Great idea. Nice cut-out. The yellow balls are too bright, and the border doesn't help, IMO. |
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02/10/2003 10:41:10 PM |
Nice color, but kind of easy, and I think the yellow frame takes away from the golf balls. |
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02/10/2003 03:53:18 PM |
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02/10/2003 03:14:55 AM |
I like the idea a lot but I do find the yellow/green just too bright while the face is too dark.The details on the red balls are lost. |
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02/10/2003 12:33:26 AM |
it's not affecting your score, but the border here is too loud.. it is grabbing my attention away from your photo... - setzler |
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