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Challenge: Defining Feature III (Standard Editing)
Date: Mar 27, 2017
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/40
Date Uploaded: Mar 27, 2017

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04/04/2017 10:09:01 PM
I had seen image from the same environment, not sure you are the same person.

Here are my point of view to your image:

1. Focus
Currently your focus is out. There are few factors affecting your focus ΓΆ€“ shutter speed is not enough or either the model had moved. You need to shoot wide open say F/4 and pump up your ISO if necessary. Aim at the eyes when you shoot (IMO - in my own opinion)

2. Composition
Do watch out for the background. Avoid overlapping. Right now your model has overlapped with the guy behind. Tried moving to the left.

I feel, in this instance, Point 1 (focus) is crucial, at least to get the viewer attention.

Hope this helps.
 04/03/2017 09:28:08 AM
Out of focus
 03/31/2017 05:47:51 PM
Perfect for the challenge topic but needs to be in focus.


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