Greetings from the Critique Club, Robbie!
So close to a Top Ten!
I think what held you back is not your composition... that's wonderful.
Not your colors... those are fabulous.
I see a bunch of noise in your image... It might be your processing... I'm not sure.
The noise is a distraction for me as a viewer.
I totally LOVE your composition... straight on... in my face!
I think the noise held back your score.
*sigh*
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