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Searching for a former clarity
Searching for a former clarity
JopsyDaisy


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Challenge: Composite (Expert Editing)
Location: London
Date: Nov 26, 2015
Aperture: n/a
ISO: 200
Shutter: n/a
Date Uploaded: Nov 26, 2015

Combination of 5 photos: background, model, light fixture, light bulb, moon.

Statistics
Place: 9 out of 35
Avg (all users): 6.3421
Avg (commenters): 7.6667
Avg (participants): 5.7273
Avg (non-participants): 6.5926
Views since voting: 285
Views during voting: 198
Votes: 76
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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12/11/2015 10:01:37 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Wow, this is something else. A supermoon rising over a crazily tilting cityscape and a suited model with a light fixture for a head holding a lightbulb. Definitely searching for something! I gave this a 7 in voting. Glad I did. I like more abstract ideas brought to life like this.

I think the main problem here is more technical than anything. All the light sources are from behind, yet the model is lit from the front right (shadow cast to the left and rear). In reality the opposite would be true, the shadow should fall mostly to the front right on the ground ahead of them. Maybe a blending layer to help the model fit into the street scene? I think this is what pulled your score down. I tend to make the same sort of mistakes too so Ah feel yer pain ;-)

But you still finished in the Top Ten so it's not all that bad, and for the most part it's an interesting image and well done. Keep up the good work!

Susan
12/08/2015 02:19:48 PM
I agree this is very creative, congratulations on your top 10.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/03/2015 08:01:22 AM
weird
12/03/2015 12:02:31 AM
Very creative Give 8
  Photographer found comment helpful.
11/27/2015 09:43:00 PM
7 from me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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