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02/03/2003 06:57:31 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Dave...
Technically, this is a very good shot. I don't know what kind of lens you used, but whatever it is worked well. F27 seems a bit drastic :) I believe you were going for strong depth of field, which you achieved.
I believe the 'sharpness' could be a little stronger in this image. Maybe a quick pass with the photoshop sharpen filter?
The color of the light reflecting off the metallic surface is also picking up a yellow glow from your light source. A little desaturation on the yellow/red channels may have brightened this up a little also :)
The image is very strong technically... that is good work for sure. Subjectively, I think it's a little weaker maybe. In the past, I have always strived for technical perfection in my images also. I am in a stage now where I'm trying to integrate technical excellence with subjective 'wow' factor at the same time...
Keep up the good work!
John Setzler
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02/02/2003 09:22:55 PM |
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02/01/2003 02:49:32 PM |
The use of the compass makes this an original image (and it adds color without breaking the balance), the combination of angles is very good.
Good lighting, nice frame. |
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02/01/2003 12:53:20 PM |
| You are the only one who actually naided it right on. Besides that this is a really good photo. I especially like the color to it.. Great composition with really good execution. Nice border. Because you nailed it with a good photo you get a 10. |
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01/31/2003 01:22:04 PM |
| Not wild about the composition, but I can't argue that this is definitely a clear, sharp and well taken photo - Inspzil |
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01/31/2003 08:30:36 AM |
| point well taken-answers the debate in the forums! |
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01/30/2003 11:32:32 PM |
| Great composition, the thingy-ma-bobby caliper really adds interest and dynamics to this shot. |
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01/30/2003 06:01:04 PM |
| Lovely and so funny! Thank you for making me laugh! |
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01/28/2003 10:33:48 PM |
| Wow, I really like the clearity that you achieved with this image. The keys are well defined and the lighting is good. This is a good image. |
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01/28/2003 07:38:33 PM |
| Nice shot and your border really adds to it. This is a good argument for borders. Nice focus and lighting. |
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01/28/2003 06:53:03 PM |
| Nice photo. Good composition, color, DOF, and framing. Plus there is no doubt that it is square!! 9 Cub |
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01/28/2003 01:37:24 PM |
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01/27/2003 10:54:31 PM |
| I'm gonna go out on a limb and call you Mags. Am I right? Very clean work. Well lit and tack sharp. Why color? |
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01/27/2003 01:25:08 PM |
| Technically perfect. The things that grab me are the sharpness and the gold reflections on the keypad. Composition is great. Well done. |
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01/27/2003 11:04:04 AM |
| Great idea. Excellent composition. Why didn't I think of something like this? 9 from me. |
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01/27/2003 02:19:56 AM |
| I like the "calipers". But I would have shown more of them, putting them more towards the lower right. |
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01/27/2003 12:42:04 AM |
| GREAT photo. Very well done and nice unique subject. This would be great on a office wall. = 10 |
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