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Challenge: Lawn II (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Sony Alpha a7 II
Lens: Canon 50mm f/0.95
Location: Birmingham, England
Date: Apr 11, 2015
Aperture: f/0.95
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/8000
Date Uploaded: Apr 11, 2015

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Statistics
Place: 45 out of 57
Avg (all users): 5.0130
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.8485
Avg (non-participants): 5.1364
Views since voting: 242
Views during voting: 140
Votes: 77
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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04/23/2015 04:44:41 PM
My favourite.

Sense of movement at f.95 and 1/8000th of a second? Wonderful.
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04/23/2015 06:03:34 AM
Oh SNAP!
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04/22/2015 03:50:41 PM
lovely image
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/17/2015 09:31:24 PM
7 from me (earlier). Not sure how I like the unfocussedness of it all. It's hard for me. Ha!

But... the feel is so fun!
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04/17/2015 11:23:45 AM
What I like:
- The movement of the children contrasting against the stillness of the tree.
- The framing of the children by the tree branch
- Composure is awesome!

What I don't like:
- Children are out of focus
- Pretty much everything is out of focus, giving the shot more the appearance of a painting than a photograph. Some may like this effect, I don not.
- Girl's clothing is burnt out. Can't really see the pink flowers- if the balance was better on this pic, those flowers would really pop making the framing even better. If the tree branches were made selectively brighter, it would burn out the distracting building in the background. I'd have tried to take a second picture after the children ran by and exposed for the tree. (I, however, have no idea how to do this- I'm more a darkroom editor and I would have selectively exposed the tree longer than the kids.)

Overall: Great idea, but lack of focus for the children takes away from overall mood.
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04/16/2015 12:42:11 AM
Fun!
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04/15/2015 12:45:20 PM
I like the composition, but I'm not really fond of the colors and in the left lower corner the focus seems really odd.
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04/15/2015 08:14:05 AM
Nostalgic vibe is great here.
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