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10/27/2004 09:01:00 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!!!
let me start by saying it's a great idea, but there is some strange stuff going on in the forground of the image. It looks as if you shot this photo though a glass? Is that frost that is softening the focus on the right and left of the photo? I also find the bottom crop a little distracting. If the bottom was cropped a little tighter, it wouldn't feel so "unbalanced" especially since this is such a "balanced" shot.
I understand why you chose BW, but I really think it would have worked much better in color. The sharpness in the center pencils is good, but I really think this scored as low as it did because of the distracting blur in the forground. I think that one aspect alone dropped your score.
Overall, it's a great idea, and a nice shot!
Keep it up, clean it up, and you should be scoring higher in the future :)
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10/25/2004 08:07:11 PM |
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10/24/2004 01:38:44 AM |
| cool itz sortov an illussion i couldn't make out what i was looking at, for about 5 seconds - good idea im guess your getting slaughted with this one since no one can probally be bothered looking at it for 5 seconds so i give you a [8] to help you out |
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10/23/2004 02:00:07 PM |
| it is hard to tell what is going on (what the pecils are in) i probably would have cropped off the bottom. the scratches take away but they let you know your looking trough something. nice focus on the pencils |
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10/22/2004 10:13:02 AM |
| At first it was hard to tell what this is but as I stared for a while I could see it. Very unique idea, however, it seems a little dark. |
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10/21/2004 05:56:40 PM |
| How many pencils were harmed in the making of the photo? I like this image, it makes you think. Would like more if the photo was cropped tighter to the bottom edge, just at the line cutting out the black and gray underneath. |
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10/21/2004 01:06:41 AM |
| Average, not sure where you were going with this idea, but I like the close up. |
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10/20/2004 08:23:21 AM |
| would score higher in colour, I think |
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10/20/2004 02:04:12 AM |
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