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02/07/2003 10:32:58 PM |
Critique Club Assignment :
Overall this image lacks interest. I don't understand the title, but that is okay. It is a square, but... ? What does it mean to anyone?
It is a dead end.. i.e. nowhere for the eye to go. Just stops at the end at the door/vent.
I am just trying to be honest.. please don't take it badly :0)
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01/30/2003 02:25:40 PM |
Composition: Nice use of adjacent shapes
Technical: Spot on
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Good photo, not sure it's as aesthetic as I would like |
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01/30/2003 01:55:20 PM |
| There is nothing that specatcular about this focal point that warrents this much attention to it. However you lines are very nice. They lead right to the door. From a composition stand point you did well. For content a ratty door does not do anything for me. I give yo a five. |
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01/29/2003 10:58:13 PM |
| Needs a little more light. Focus not bad. I would like to see a little more on the left side, as much as you have wall on the right side. Nice squares. Worth a 5. One question - what does you title "untitled film still" mean? |
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01/29/2003 08:11:39 PM |
| I'm not crazy about the lighting in this - the darkness in the "courtyard" area is too much. And I really don't see a true square in this photo. |
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01/29/2003 10:04:23 AM |
| i think it ok,but you could get closer. |
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01/29/2003 04:53:26 AM |
| Nicely rendered and well balanced setting, could use an interesting detail to attract the eye and keep the attention on it |
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01/27/2003 09:00:09 PM |
| Too much uninteresting "stuff" in this photo. |
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01/27/2003 03:18:08 PM |
| oooooooooooo what can you say!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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