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markwiley


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Challenge: Jewelry Advertisement II (Expert Editing*)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Date: Oct 30, 2014
Date Uploaded: Oct 30, 2014

I think some creative text might have helped it look more like an ad. I appreciate the comments on the crop. I should have experimented more to see if a different crop would make it stronger.

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Place: 11 out of 35
Avg (all users): 6.1905
Avg (commenters): 7.2857
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Views since voting: 302
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Votes: 105
Comments: 10
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11/08/2014 10:40:11 AM
Mark - Very classic and nicely framed. I thought it deserved a higher rating.
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11/07/2014 05:03:09 PM
this is a beautiful classic photo as is. only after awhile do we see that cunning echo in the iris. beautiful textures, composition and light.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/06/2014 11:33:48 PM
surprising.
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11/04/2014 11:12:42 PM
This actually looks like something that could be in a magazine, advertising jewelry.
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11/03/2014 10:17:04 AM
Nice. Excellent details and tones, and exciting composition. I'm wondering if you had something blowing her hair back, or is it gravity and it was rotated?
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11/02/2014 11:16:47 AM
Interesting, but something bothers me about her eye.
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11/01/2014 09:55:24 PM
I love this idea! And I love the hair blowing!

I'd have cropped the top to the middle of the eyebrow... or even crop it to the middle of her eye...and made the earring be the brightest spot in the image to draw attention to the jewelry you're trying to sell.

The little bit of shadows where I assume her mouth is starting are a bit distracting, but if you crop in the horizontal middle of her eye, you could take off some of the right of the image too and that would get rid of those mouth shadows. I'd also have cloned out the little bit of slit in her ear hole that makes me think the earring is going to be too heavy and cause slits in my ears.

I sound like I really don't like it, but that's not true. I DO love your idea here and it could be tweaked to be the winner of the challenge.
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10/31/2014 04:53:37 PM
A lovely portrait. But the crop, the flowing hair, and the very interesting eye, all pull me away from the earring. Perhaps a slight vignetting...
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10/31/2014 01:14:12 PM
I think I may have seen these before being swept along by the wind.
But I may be wrong, its a good image with a neat crop anyway.
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10/31/2014 08:17:17 AM
great detail in this. Could see this in a teen magazine spread. Maybe adding some text would have further enhanced the ad aspect? 8
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