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03/10/2003 11:01:51 AM |
Originally posted by kandyj:
Critique Club:
Lili, thought at first this photo was playing with the flying plane in the upper left section, then I read the title and got your point!
Composition: Good use of negative space, a nice simple clean composition, with contrasting colors. I, like some of the other commenters like the plane in the sky and it helps make fun of the speed sign and balances out the picture a bit.
Technical Quality: Some jpg artifacts in the solid areas might have been removed with despeckling,
salt/pepper filter or an edge preserving smoothing filter such as neatimage. Wish those sticker looking white things weren't on the sign, but hey, it's a children's crossing and they tend to put stickers on anything they can find, if that's what they are. They are a bit distracting to me. I like the interesting angle of the shot. Except for the artifacts, the shot is crisp, well-saturated and well-lit.
Overall: An interesting photograph, likely not something I would hang on my wall, but the challenge this week was difficult to meet with "pretty" photos!!
HOpe this has been helpful to you. (;*)
Creativity: Nice use of an otherwise boring sign, especially with your interpretation, the plane included and the humourous title. |
Thank you for your critic! |
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01/28/2003 11:24:03 PM |
Critique Club:
Lili, thought at first this photo was playing with the flying plane in the upper left section, then I read the title and got your point!
Composition: Good use of negative space, a nice simple clean composition, with contrasting colors. I, like some of the other commenters like the plane in the sky and it helps make fun of the speed sign and balances out the picture a bit.
Technical Quality: Some jpg artifacts in the solid areas might have been removed with despeckling, salt/pepper filter or an edge preserving smoothing filter such as neatimage. Wish those sticker looking white things weren't on the sign, but hey, it's a children's crossing and they tend to put stickers on anything they can find, if that's what they are. They are a bit distracting to me. I like the interesting angle of the shot. Except for the artifacts, the shot is crisp, well-saturated and well-lit.
Overall: An interesting photograph, likely not something I would hang on my wall, but the challenge this week was difficult to meet with "pretty" photos!!
HOpe this has been helpful to you. (;*)
Creativity: Nice use of an otherwise boring sign, especially with your interpretation, the plane included and the humourous title.
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01/26/2003 10:04:51 PM |
| Nice shot. I like the colors and the capture of the jet in the sky. |
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01/26/2003 09:47:23 PM |
| Great sign. You could fix the noise in your sky with a program such as neatimage. jgillard7 |
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01/24/2003 09:40:50 PM |
| Wonder, wonderful colour saturation. I like the inclusion of the plane. I find the white stickers a bit distracting. Good luck. Jacko. 9 |
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01/24/2003 12:25:54 AM |
| Outstanding color and crispness. Nice job. |
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01/23/2003 11:15:01 PM |
| If the contrail was at any other angle it would be a distraction, but it works as you got it. Interesting that the top sign is the same shape as a baseball home-plate. |
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01/23/2003 08:32:02 PM |
| very clever shot..well positioned and great colors. |
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01/23/2003 06:24:42 PM |
| I love the contrast and simplicity of the colors in this shot. My only suggestion would be to try NEAT IMAGE or somethng like that as I can see some "noise" in the sky (other than teh plane and contrail). |
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01/23/2003 03:18:49 PM |
| Wonderful colors! Great title |
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01/22/2003 11:45:22 PM |
| Nice backround with the Blue Sky. Like the Plane going by. That Green really stands out. Really nice job! |
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01/22/2003 10:49:33 PM |
| is it over exposed or is that the real color of the yellow sign. The sky in the background is great. The airplane is a added bonus, however I don't think he is going 30 |
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01/22/2003 09:03:53 PM |
| Lovely contrast in colour here, a good simple composition |
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01/22/2003 07:10:16 PM |
| Nice vivid colours. A shame about the plane, I would have prefered a clear sky. I would also have zoomed out a touch, so that the signs were not so close to the edge of the frame. Otherwise, great shot. I like it. |
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01/22/2003 06:29:50 PM |
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01/22/2003 05:33:30 PM |
| Nice colors & graphic effect. |
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01/22/2003 12:51:18 PM |
| Bright and colourful. Love it. |
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01/22/2003 08:47:58 AM |
| Nice idea, the blue sky brings out the sign nicely as well. I'm not sure if the jet is distracting, or to add something that I missed in the concept. |
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01/22/2003 07:58:43 AM |
| Excellent composition! My second best photo of the challlenge! I really love the jet in the back ground and your title makes me laugh! Hihihihihihihi! :OP |
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01/21/2003 04:37:27 PM |
| Wozer! Looks like you found the saturation slider! :) |
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01/21/2003 10:47:09 AM |
| Wonderful bright colours. A cute interp. I'm not sure about the composition. |
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01/21/2003 06:55:33 AM |
| Nice colors. Did you use a pol filter? 7 from me. |
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01/20/2003 11:10:16 PM |
| Cute! I like the plane in the background. |
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01/20/2003 08:44:34 PM |
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01/20/2003 06:21:43 PM |
| The perspective is great, colours are wonderful and the jet stream is an interesting addition. My question, then, is what are the three white patches on the 30 sign? Are they some kind of reflection or something stuck to the sign? I must say again though - the blue and green is wonderful. |
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01/20/2003 06:05:51 PM |
| Love the bright, crisp colors, and the plane give it a little bonus. |
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01/20/2003 05:22:35 PM |
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01/20/2003 02:19:07 PM |
| The green/blue/white combo is excellent. |
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01/20/2003 10:37:56 AM |
| Wonderful contrast of colours. The jet in background is slightly distracting but overall a very good picture. 7 |
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01/20/2003 01:50:02 AM |
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