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Challenge: Zippers (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-6D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Canada, Montreal
Date: Sep 6, 2014
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/250
Date Uploaded: Sep 6, 2014

A zipper has been built to open or close an item. In this challenge it is opened to my next vacation

Hope you will like my composition

Statistics
Place: 7 out of 48
Avg (all users): 6.0513
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 5.7000
Avg (non-participants): 6.2708
Views since voting: 583
Views during voting: 173
Votes: 78
Comments: 6
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09/17/2014 07:01:03 AM
Critique Club Comment:

I really liked this one a lot. The green grabs you and offsets the sand and shell nicely. Composition is very good, though I would have preferred the zipper to lead from the corner rather than the edge. The shell might have been better placed in the center of the spread of the zipper, more towards the crossing of 1/3 lines, or a second object placed there. Regardless, the shell feels like it's too close to the edge given all the sand. As I mentioned below, I'd also like to have had the green on the top zipper pushed back so that it exposed the teeth as with the zipper below.

A fine image that I gave a 7. A very deserving top 10.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/13/2014 04:24:34 PM
This looks really awesome!! Great execution and cool idea. Very colorful and unique.
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09/09/2014 03:44:12 AM
Cool idea. Would have liked to see some of the green pulled away from the left side where it splits.
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09/08/2014 10:07:57 PM
How creative is this! This has been awesome to see and different a bit bright on the bottom but the thought is there... very different and yes I love things like this
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09/08/2014 03:43:32 PM
well done, creative
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09/08/2014 02:53:44 PM
This is an excellent concept, and well executed. Hope it does well.
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