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01/28/2003 01:17:36 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition
This picture made me smile but I feel that there is a little too much going on in it. I think that the cat is an unecessary distraction and is not in focus. I think that the glass is in the wrong place as the milk is giving the impression of running up hill.
Exposure: The picture is a bit soft and slightly out of focus
Contrast & Color: this is also a little flat and undersaturated
Suggestions for improvement
Perhaps using a higher aperature and faster shutter speed and rearranging the composition with and without the cat. |
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01/26/2003 02:04:54 PM |
| This is too funny, I love it. |
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01/24/2003 05:48:37 PM |
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01/24/2003 01:32:11 PM |
| Interesting concept. Very creative, although I'm not sure that the cat adds anything here and actually may take away from the rest of the shot. I think I would like to see the glass where the cat is pouring down toward the girl. Good job. |
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01/23/2003 03:36:43 AM |
| I find this photo interesting and creative. It tells a little story, and uses visual elements that are composed in a slightly surreal way... chaotic but obviously arranged with a lot of thought. It's hard to get a sense of perspective here, and the cat is motion blurred, but somehow I like it :). |
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01/23/2003 01:52:21 AM |
| cat is not very focused in the background |
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01/22/2003 05:50:45 PM |
| Don't cry over spilled milk. I like the idea, but the picture seems a bit messy because of the motion blur on the cat. Good luck. |
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01/22/2003 09:22:58 AM |
| I think the soft focus is appropriate for this idea, and works. Harmonizes the cat and the milk with the cartoon. |
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01/21/2003 04:37:43 PM |
| funny and good effort altho a lot of the elements are sort having a jumbled effect |
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01/20/2003 09:03:14 PM |
| This was good idea, an interesting approach to the topic! Was the shutter speed very slow casue there is quite a bit of blur on the cat, maybe would be better if this was more in focus. |
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01/20/2003 05:17:50 PM |
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01/20/2003 03:42:06 PM |
| Good idea! It seems like the focus is on the girl, maybe it would be good to focus on the milk or the cat spilling the milk. |
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01/20/2003 10:17:12 AM |
Lucky kitty. This shot is a good idea.
The execution is weak and the focus are soft.
I understand the challenge of shooting cats! [See my profile.] Ya take what ya get. Because of the clever idea, the hardship of animals ...............and that you had to clean up the milk....I give you an 8. Also the colors are good and you fit the challenge 110%. :) |
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01/20/2003 04:57:13 AM |
| A lot going on here. Unfortunately none of it is very clear. Conceptually its pretty good. The execution leaves much to be desired, like focus. Lighting is pretty good too. Good Luck - Inspzil |
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01/20/2003 12:14:43 AM |
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